剑桥雅思8写作：Test2雅思写作task1真题+范文

　　题目分析,包括回答中需要涉及的要点、对比以及考生可能对题目产生的错 误理解。

　　WRITING

　　要点

　　1. 其中两个代表薪资水平,两个代表基础设施配备,第五个代表计划(财务方面)。

　　2. 不同的方面代表不同的趋向。


　　3. 文章应该提及所有出现的数字。(包含 15 组数字)

　　师资点题剑桥雅思 8作文

　　考生可能产生的错误理解和问题

　　1. 应使用过去完成时。


　　2. 数字用百分比表达,不必写出总额数。

　　建议的写作结构,对比此结构与考生有可能采用的不恰当结构。

　　介绍部分应该把题目用自己的话重写一遍。正文主体部分可以有三种写作样式。可以将正 文划分为 5 段(每段描述一个条目),或者分为 3 段(每段按照薪资水平,基础设施配备和 计划来描述一个饼形图)。对大部分考生而言,每段描述一个饼形图的写作样式或许会比较 容易,但是如果选择此种样式,切忌数字重复出现。最后应该有一个简短的评论,要特别 突出 1-2 个关键点。

　　参考范文
The pie charts show how a school spent money, in percentage terms, in the years 1981, 1991and 2001, across five categories.

　　The majority of spending in each year was on salaries. Teachers’ salaries accounted for 40% of spending in 1981. This increased to 50% in 1991, but dropped to 45% in 2001. Salaries for other workers accounted for 28% of spending in 1981, 22% in 1991 and 15% in 2001, demonstrating a constant fall.

　　Spending on resources such as books and on furniture and equipment took up 30% of

　　spending in 1981 – 15% each. By 1991, spending on resources had risen to 20% whilst spending on furniture and equipment had fallen dramatically to only 5%. By 2001, spending on resources had more than halved (in percentage terms) to 9% whereas spending on furniture and equipment had risen relatively substantially to 23%.

　　Finally, spending on insurance rose from 2% in 1981 to 3% in 1991 and thereafter to a more significant 9% of the total in 2001.

　　In summary, relative spending in all five categories changed a lot, with spending on teachers’ salaries being the largest portion.

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